Audience Feedback
"I think it is very very good and very good camera working. A pretty girl you chose aka sister. I think the lip syncing is good but at points it could be better. Liking the clip board!"
"Love the moving car scenes, wish Phoebe would be have shown a little more confidence. Apart from that really impressive."
"Use effects over 'Phoebe' clips."
"Great use of real life experiences to match the lyrics. More effects could be added to improve it and make it look more professionally edited. Really good attempt for just starting out enjoyed the overall atmosphere."
The audience feedback has helped me think about where to go next with the editing. I am going to add effects over some of the clips and double check that all the lip syncing is as in sync as it can be.
